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Hi, Malfoy 
19th-May-2010 08:59 pm
Converse: black
Title: Hi, Malfoy
Word count: ~900
Characters/pairings: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Comment!porn based on this fantastic art by reira_21. Harry pounces on Draco, wanting to play.
Warnings: consensual non-con, light breathplay, forced orgasm
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: This comment!porn has been being written a sentence or two at a time in a tab for WEEKS.

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Harry entered their bedroom, and stood at the door for a long moment. Draco was standing in front of his chest of drawers and gloriously naked.

Draco didn’t know he was there until he pounced.

Harry clapped his hand over Draco’s mouth, strangling his cry. He dragged Draco’s arm behind his back, holding him there like he was a criminal.

Draco’s body bucked instinctively against Harry’s grasp, his right hand coming up in protest. But Harry had an Auror’s bruising grip on his left wrist, and Draco surely didn’t really want to escape.

Which was good, because Harry had no intention of letting him.

Draco’s face was gorgeous: so startled, so vulnerable in that first flash of surprise. Harry almost shuddered with the power he felt as he looked Draco over, taking in his defenceless, handsome face, feeling his lips part in shock against his hand.

Harry leant over his shoulder, pressing close to drink in his expression. Draco, breathing fast, tried to look over his shoulder. “Ah ah ah,” Harry murmured, his grip on Draco’s face holding him still.

He wanted Draco unable to see what was coming.

Harry squeezed, feeling the delicate bones of Draco’s wrist crunch beneath his grip. “Hi, Malfoy.”

Malfoy. It was his signal that he wanted to play.

At that signal, Draco’s body went stiff. He said something, a breathless attempt at anger muffled under Harry’s hand. Harry smirked, and pulled his arm harder behind his back in punishment. Draco protested again, louder: Harry caught a swearword.

Tut tut.

“Don’t swear at me, Malfoy. You’re not getting away from me this time.”

Draco gasped, his hot breath hitting Harry’s palm. The feeling gave Harry an idea. He slid the hand on Draco’s mouth down, following the soft underside of his chin to the vulnerable stretch of his neck. Then he pressed down, forcing Draco’s head back against his shoulder, his neck stretched taut in a painful curve.

Draco’s eyes were wide, almost rolling, and his throat was working in anxiety against Harry’s hand. The power in it, in having this beautiful man in his arms, this beautiful body moving to his will, made Harry’s cock twitch. He pressed his hips forward to make Draco feel it.

Harry let go of Draco’s arm. But that was fine: Draco was immobilised by the hand on his neck. He pinched a hard nipple, feeling the minute flinch all along his body. He rubbed his hand down Draco’s stomach, feeling the muscle and soft flesh with obscene enjoyment.

Draco was flushing in humiliation; he winced as Harry tugged at his pubic hair. Harry couldn’t stop himself rocking his hips a little; it was so hot, seeing how exposed this game made Draco feel.

He gripped Draco’s straining cock.

“You like this.” His voice was harsh. “Wow. Never knew you were such a slut, Malfoy.”

Draco shut his eyes in shame, his face splotchy with embarrassment.

“No hiding from me,” Harry demanded. “Open your eyes.”

Draco just squeezed them shut more, fear in his face.

Quite justified fear, as Harry intended to show him. He let go of Draco’s cock, only to squeeze his balls painfully. “Open your eyes! Now!”

Draco’s now-watering eyes opened. Harry grinned at him, showing teeth. “That’s better.”

He loosened his grip on Draco’s balls, slow enough to be a threat, and returned his hand to Draco’s cock. Harry started wanking him, firm and regular.

“Don’t,” Draco said, breathless, half-pleading.

Harry ignored him.

“Stop. Potter, c-come on – I. Please!” Draco cried out, voice ringing helplessly through the room, as Harry tweaked the head of his cock in a very specific way Draco liked.

Harry grinned. He lowered his mouth to Draco’s shoulder, skimmed his teeth over the curve of it. Strong, and tense, and all under his control. “You can keep begging me to stop. It’s rather nice. But I’m going to keep going until I get what I want, and you’re not going to stop me.”

Draco shuddered, full-body and delicious.

Harry kept working him. Draco gritted his teeth, obviously trying not to respond: but it was hopeless. Harry knew just how to touch him, had all the experience of a long-time lover in just how to make him fall apart.

“You can’t get away,” he murmured. Draco exploded in struggle for a moment, crying out. He took Harry by surprise. But he was stronger, and it was easy bringing him back under control.

“What did I just say?” he snapped, hand already at work. Draco whimpered.

Forcing pleasure on him was easy, this way. And Draco was so easy when he was restrained. Soon enough he was shuddering in Harry’s arms. When he came, it was with a half-sob. Harry held him up through it, drinking in his expression, the defeated sound of his cries.

Draco was almost limp against him, breathing heavily. Harry smiled and kissed his cheek. “Did you like that?” Draco moaned softly. “I got you off, nice and easy.” He drew back. Draco was taken by surprise as Harry’s support was removed, and it was easy to bring him to his knees.

“Now,” Harry said, leaning close so his shadow fell across Draco’s face, so all Draco could see was him: “I think you’d better return the favour. Don’t you?”
19th-May-2010 08:11 pm (UTC)
Okay, I had to pick up my chin from the floor :P

That was hooooot!!!

I want to talk to you, btw.
20th-May-2010 09:41 am (UTC)
LOL, thank you!

I will work on the drabble thing!
21st-May-2010 01:04 am (UTC)
Sorry, I know this is random, but haven't I seen you in
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Sorry, I know this is random, but haven't I seen you in <ljuser=sparrabeth>?
21st-May-2010 01:04 am (UTC)
And also, don't I fail at that tag because I never use it? :D
19th-May-2010 08:44 pm (UTC)
I have no idea how you're so amazing. I got my rocks off at Harry pulling Draco's pubes and squeezing his balls. UNF. This was delicious.
20th-May-2010 09:56 am (UTC)
:DDD Thank you! Specially since I heart your work!
19th-May-2010 09:07 pm (UTC)
YUM. I especially love the idea of Harry and Draco using last names to create that kind of play mentality. Delicious smut, as usual!
20th-May-2010 10:03 am (UTC)
:D Thank you!
19th-May-2010 10:33 pm (UTC)
This is Katelin's brain, I'm not here right now but you can leave a message after the beep

20th-May-2010 09:54 am (UTC)
LMAO, excellent comment! Thanks!
20th-May-2010 12:22 am (UTC)
Hooootttt!!! Oooh it burns so nice lol!! I love when they use the last names!
20th-May-2010 09:45 am (UTC)
:D Thank you!
20th-May-2010 01:05 am (UTC)
20th-May-2010 09:41 am (UTC)
Thank you!
20th-May-2010 02:10 am (UTC)


I hope there are kissin's and cuddlin's after. *is a fluffy wimp at heart*
20th-May-2010 09:40 am (UTC)
:) Of course! You know me, there's always cuddles after kink.
20th-May-2010 05:34 am (UTC)
OMG! So hot *fans* self!
20th-May-2010 09:40 am (UTC)
Heh, thanks!
20th-May-2010 04:47 pm (UTC)
*fans self*

Fuck that was hot.

21st-May-2010 02:02 am (UTC)
Thank you! *beams*
22nd-May-2010 09:46 am (UTC)
Merlin, that was hot.
I love the use of surnames as it gives takes them back to school and anymosity though it means something quite different now. :D

Just really good. Any hope for Draco's point of view on what happens next?
22nd-May-2010 02:46 pm (UTC)
:D Thanks! The title of reira_21's art sparked a lot of thoughts

Heh, you never know! :)
23rd-May-2010 09:22 am (UTC)

So. Hot.

24th-May-2010 11:40 am (UTC)
:D Thank you!
24th-May-2010 08:00 pm (UTC)
Hi missus, do you have an account on the hexfiles or a masterlist somewhere? *pokes* I wanna read more..

if you have an obvious masterlist in a sticky post and I missed it because of my dumbness, please feel free to wack me *bows*



26th-May-2010 11:20 am (UTC)
I have an account at Skyehawke, but you're better off checking my sticky post - top of my LJ is the Potter fic masterlist :) Enjoy!
26th-May-2010 03:04 pm (UTC)
*groans* *wacks self*
26th-May-2010 11:22 pm (UTC)
LOL, no smacking!

...Only smacking in the presence of a hot partner!
25th-May-2010 05:12 am (UTC)
Good grief that was hot!! I... yeah, I can't form any other words. *fans self*
26th-May-2010 11:18 am (UTC)
:D Thanks!
10th-Jul-2010 06:36 am (UTC)
My first reaction to the picture was "Oh, Jesus." And you've done it justice. ;)
10th-Jul-2010 01:04 pm (UTC)
:DDD That's a fantastic compliment, cos that art is seriously just... *faints*
26th-Mar-2011 04:46 pm (UTC)

Very very good.

26th-Mar-2011 05:23 pm (UTC)
:D Thanks!

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