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Keeper 
14th-Jun-2010 10:52 pm
Converse: black
Title: Keeper
Word count: 200
Characters/pairings: Ron/Draco
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ron’s a Keeper. So is Draco. (The author hopes the phrase ‘that one’s a keeper’, ie somebody you should keep as your romantic partner, is an international one.)
Warnings: fluff
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: This was written for the storm prompt at rondracodrabble.


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The storm made Quidditch impossible. After an hour in the pub, the Cannons’ Keeper and the Arrowheads’ Seeker disappeared.

Draco giggled into Ron’s shirt as they stumbled up the stairs. Ron creased up at the feel of Draco’s breath against his neck.

Draco opened the door and they fell in together. Draco pushed Ron to the floor, his grey eyes alight. “Gotcha! I’m good at catching shiny things, all for me.”

“You are,” Ron said and flipped Draco onto his back, straddling him. He smiled down at Draco’s disgruntled face. “But I’m good at keeping them. All for me.”

~*~

He stroked the back of his fingers over the curve of Draco’s cheek. Draco flinched from the touch, staring up at him in irritable confusion.

“What d’you – ”

“Exclusivity. I want this particular pretty, shiny thing to be really just for me.”

Draco eyed him suspiciously, even as his breathing sped up: Ron was unbuttoning Draco’s shirt. “Only exclusivity? Not going public or holding hands or declaring true love?”

Ron smiled. “Seekers might rush around, trying to get the shiny thing as fast as they can… but I’m willing to take my time.”

Shiny things like wedding bands would come later.
Comments 
14th-Jun-2010 10:41 pm (UTC)
Aw! Bless! I love the Quidditch word-play and the all-round lovey dovey-ness.
15th-Jun-2010 03:34 pm (UTC)
:D Thanks! This is so sweet it's giving people toothache, I imagine, but that's fun sometimes :)
14th-Jun-2010 11:07 pm (UTC)
Yayyy. I'm actually grinning from ear to ear. you've done it again *sigh*
♥ ♥ ♥
15th-Jun-2010 03:35 pm (UTC)
:D Thank you! This really is sickeningly fluffy, I'm glad it made you smile.
15th-Jun-2010 12:22 am (UTC)
AWWWW!!!!!That was So Incredibly Sweet!!!! 'Emotional range of a teaspoon' my ass!

You are definitely the Goddess of the Drabble, m'dear! <3
15th-Jun-2010 03:55 pm (UTC)
:D Thank you!

*blushes*
15th-Jun-2010 01:04 am (UTC)
*giggles* The wordplay is adorable. Brilliant fic.
15th-Jun-2010 03:33 pm (UTC)
:D Thanks! The urge to pun is strong with this one.
15th-Jun-2010 03:40 am (UTC)
Awww. I love your fluffy Ron/Draco drabbles!
15th-Jun-2010 03:32 pm (UTC)
:) I'm glad, since this is so fluffy it's candyfloss and kids' pictures of clouds!
15th-Jun-2010 12:36 pm (UTC)
Oh, wookie, I learned a new idiom! Thank you! :D And thank you for the Quidditch metaphor, I love such stuff.
15th-Jun-2010 03:48 pm (UTC)
:) No worries! I do love me some Quidditch metaphors in my HP slash - the game is just a gift to punners.
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15th-Jun-2010 03:48 pm (UTC)
:) Thanks!
17th-Jun-2010 09:21 pm (UTC)
Awww, lovely. <3
I love the thing they use to communicate is Quidditch. Makes me happy. :) Although at the moment the mere thought of Ron is making me smile. Pffft. I say "at the moment", I mean ALWAYS.


Sorry I'm not at the barbecue, I've had a cold for a couple of days and I feel like death on toast, with a side of shit. :/ I really wanted to be there!
18th-Jun-2010 06:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I love me some Quidditch punning, especially them using it to find a connection.

:D <-- my Ron smile.

Aww, no worries! I hope you feel better soon.
17th-Jun-2010 11:04 pm (UTC)
Aww! This fluff has made me very happy.

*beams*
18th-Jun-2010 06:01 pm (UTC)
:D I'm glad!
10th-Jul-2010 07:11 am (UTC)
Ahh, the fluff!! It's too much!! ...almost.
10th-Jul-2010 01:07 pm (UTC)
LOL I KNOW. *gives flist cavities*
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