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The Scientific Method *and* An Artist 
6th-Aug-2010 07:29 pm
ron/draco
Title: The Scientific Method and An Artist
Word count: 300
Characters/pairings: Ron/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A sort of diptych: Draco’s approach to sex, then Ron’s.
Warnings: fluff
Disclaimer: The boys and girls belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: This was written for rondracodrabble’s current prompt, art. Also, apparently dom-bottom!Ron is my new thing.


Draco liked to be precise about sex. He hadn’t had very much of it and he always worried he wasn’t very good. People always expected skilful depravity from the Malfoy heir. Fumbling and meaning well were not acceptable.

And this was Weasley, and he was damn well going to leave this bed dazed by Draco’s prowess.

So Draco used a precise equation of licking, sucking, and caressing. He observed and catalogued Weasley’s sucking in of breath when Draco prepared him, his increased flush at Draco’s mouth on his thighs, his moan when he felt Draco’s cock between his cheeks.

~*~

Ron rolled them so he sat astride Malfoy’s thighs, shivering as the head of Malfoy’s cock teased along his entrance. Malfoy’s eyes were heated, but still calculating: sliding quickly over him, looking for reactions – weaknesses.

Ron shook his head. “Relax.”

“Pardon?”

“Lovemaking – ”

“Fucking – ”

Lovemaking,” Ron continued doggedly, because his mum had raised him right and he wasn’t changing for Malfoy, “isn’t a science, it’s an art.”

“Oh really?”

“Yes,” and Ron took hold of Malfoy’s cock, and pushed himself down. Malfoy was big, sliding deliciously along long-neglected nerves.

Malfoy’s eyes widened and his fingers scrabbled at Ron’s thighs. Ron smiled.

~*~

Ron rode Malfoy’s cock, slow and slick. The feeling sparked lust all through him, but still better was the look on Malfoy’s face. His mouth was half-open, his eyes sliding slow and appreciative down Ron’s chest, his clenching thighs.

Ron couldn’t resist the tease of Malfoy’s nipples, pink and sweetly puckered. He pinched and teased, Malfoy’s skin hot under his fingers, Malfoy’s chest moving fast as he panted. Malfoy rubbed Ron’s back and squeezed his arse, their rhythm perfectly matched.

Malfoy’s eyes were dazed and gorgeous now: Ron came, and Malfoy followed.

Ron slumped onto his chest and mumbled, “masterpiece.”


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Comments 
6th-Aug-2010 06:40 pm (UTC)
Oh these lovely boys! I love them just like this. A masterpiece indeed!
7th-Aug-2010 11:26 am (UTC)
:) Thank you!
6th-Aug-2010 07:23 pm (UTC)
So this was really hot--even though bottom!Ron usually makes me cringe. I don't even let him bottom with Harry, LOL.
7th-Aug-2010 11:21 am (UTC)
YAY! Usually I'm not a fan, either, which I suspect is why my bottom!Ron brings the dom quite so heavily :)

OMG RIGHT. I mean I'm not a Ron/Harry fan at all, but I reckon I'd write a lot more top!Ron for that pairing.
6th-Aug-2010 08:17 pm (UTC)
Oh, yum! Far too few people write aggressive bottoms (which is an utter shame).
6th-Aug-2010 10:18 pm (UTC)
here, here.
6th-Aug-2010 08:48 pm (UTC)
I love this bottom!Ron. These two are just so hot together.
7th-Aug-2010 11:17 am (UTC)
:) Thanks!
6th-Aug-2010 09:19 pm (UTC)
I love Draco and Ron! *squishes you* I think we need to see more of dom-bottom!Ron, he is exquisite. Can I have one?

Quite the masterpiece, boys. You know we all love it. [And by you I mean YOU! Loki, not the boys!]
“Lovemaking,” Ron continued doggedly, because his mum had raised him right and he wasn’t changing for Malfoy Fave line. Definitely.
7th-Aug-2010 11:09 am (UTC)
LOL, you can not have one, for he is Draco's! But thank you :)

Hee, thanks!
6th-Aug-2010 09:43 pm (UTC)
Dom-bottom!Ron for King! ;D

Exquisitely hot and sweet. ♥
7th-Aug-2010 11:02 am (UTC)
LOL. Weasley is indeed King!

Thank you! :)
6th-Aug-2010 09:50 pm (UTC)
Awww I love what you did with the prompt! It's so Draco to be all calculating, and so Ron to throw that all out the window ;D
<33
7th-Aug-2010 11:03 am (UTC)
:) I saw the prompt and the whole 'lovemaking isn't a science' bit of dialogue went through my head straight away! YAY NEW MOD, SAYS I.
6th-Aug-2010 11:15 pm (UTC)
fnrgh :). Lovely.
7th-Aug-2010 11:05 am (UTC)
:DD Thank you!
6th-Aug-2010 11:32 pm (UTC)
Oh, so awesome! I love the idea that Draco would be insecure about being good at sex, like people would expect it of Malfoys. :)) And bottom!Ron, UNF. YES. :)
7th-Aug-2010 11:30 am (UTC)
Thank you! I love insecure-about-sex!Draco, especially since even in RL we English expect such depravity/repression from our upper class!

I am discovering the awesome of bottom!Ron. BRAVE AND HOT NEW WORLD.
7th-Aug-2010 01:41 am (UTC)
o draco, ron's a weasley they were made to fuck.

i'm not a big fan of bottom!ron but you pulled this off lovely!<3
is it just me or that when changing who is bottom or top they're appearance changes too?
ron always get a bigger bum :I
7th-Aug-2010 11:01 am (UTC)
ron's a weasley they were made to fuck.

LOLOL, so true! Mr Weasley = clearly a Viking in the sack.

Thanks! *shrugs* Personally I don't mentally change their appearances according to who tops or bottoms, and I picture Ron as having a pretty flat boy!arse. But maybe it changes usually? I haven't read enough bottom!Ron to know!
7th-Aug-2010 03:58 am (UTC)
I loved this! You captured both of them so marvelously :)
7th-Aug-2010 11:00 am (UTC)
:) Thank you!
7th-Aug-2010 04:06 am (UTC)
because his mum had raised him right and he wasn’t changing for Malfoy

I ♥ this line. I feel it depicts Ron correctly in canon if he and Draco had ended up together. =]

He hadn’t had very much of it and he always worried he wasn’t very good. People always expected skilful depravity from the Malfoy heir. Fumbling and meaning well were not acceptable

This is refreshing in contrast to the sex god!Malfoy =] It's a nice medium between sex god!Malfoy and virgin!Malfoy. =]

Everything about this was lovely and very descriptive. Good job!
7th-Aug-2010 11:20 am (UTC)
:) Thank you! Ron is a 'nice boy', as my mum would say!

Hee. It's probably the most realistic version, at least at this stage of Draco's life! *pats Draco on the head*

Thanks for the lovely long comment!
7th-Aug-2010 05:32 am (UTC)
I love seeing two different approaches to sex. :3
7th-Aug-2010 10:59 am (UTC)
:) It was fun to write!
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8th-Aug-2010 12:19 am (UTC)
LOL, thank you!
9th-Aug-2010 02:17 am (UTC)
Oh, lovely! I like that Ron saw through Draco here.
9th-Aug-2010 12:16 pm (UTC)
:D Thank you!
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