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Calling all tie-breakers and Enough 
6th-Dec-2010 12:59 pm
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Title: Enough
Word count: ~300
Characters/pairings: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Draco hopes that Potter not hating him will be enough, if he can’t stop hating himself.
Warnings: angst
Disclaimer: The boys and girls belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: Look, it is another of my attempts at the Week 1 challenge at the Harry/Draco LDWS! The prompt, once again, was I hate that I want you, 100-300 words.


Harry’s fingers were calloused, a line of lumps under the knuckle where he carried boxes of paperwork about daily. He never remembered to float them. It was an unmistakable mark of his Muggle upbringing.

More obvious still were the tiny white marks on his knees, where he’d been shoved onto gravel a thousand times: purebloods grew up without scars. Harry was sprawled on his back now, his mouth scarlet and his eyes heavy-lidded like a sated lion’s, his knees drawn up. Pulling out, still panting, Draco sat running his fingertips over them curiously. Such a peculiar thing, that long-forgotten childhood injury could leave marks this way.

His heart sped up and his thighs parted, welcoming Harry between them. Harry lay comfortably on top of him and they kissed slowly, passing breath from lip to lip.

Sweat slicked their bodies as they fucked: Draco arching to meet every thrust as Harry moved inside him, Harry’s hands holding his wrists down like he might try to flee at any moment.

Silly Potter: didn’t he know Draco would have run from this already if he could?

Draco couldn’t meet his eyes. So he found himself staring at the famous scar, visible behind Harry’s sweat-soaked fringe. Thin and unnoticeable and the epitome of everything that said this was wrong.

Draco turned his head. Harry’s hand was wrapped round his wrist just above the knot of dead tissue that marked his alliances.

He’d hated the Dark Lord so, but swearing obedience to him had left a lasting scar. After this was over – his neck arched as Potter’s cock hit his prostate, as Harry’s mouth heated a nipple – all signs would be gone.

Draco came screaming as the blood rushed in his ears; Harry grunted and bit and followed. They lay entwined while Harry softened inside him and mouthed Draco’s shoulder. Draco felt his teeth, felt the warmth rushing under his skin as Harry sucked. There would be love bites on his right shoulder tomorrow.

Draco shut his eyes and hoped it would be enough.
Comments 
6th-Dec-2010 01:15 pm (UTC)
Awwwwwwwww!! Poor baby! ;o;
I really like how you describe Draco. It is so credible and heartbreaking.
I really hope one day Harry will be able to show him that he deserves to forgive himself.
7th-Dec-2010 05:05 am (UTC)
I have been mean to him lately! Thanks, lovely. And I'm sure Harry will :)
6th-Dec-2010 01:48 pm (UTC)
ioi awwww draco. seriously i love how you can make something so hot and smutty, but at the same time make sex something more emotional and deep. IN A SAD WAY.
7th-Dec-2010 05:04 am (UTC)
Awww, thank you so much! :)
6th-Dec-2010 02:12 pm (UTC)
Oh, Draco. :-( Lovely!
7th-Dec-2010 05:01 am (UTC)
I have been very mean to him lately... Thanks!
6th-Dec-2010 04:06 pm (UTC)
Excuse me! This is ridiculously awesome! Your way of exploring this sexscene is just great: minimal description with maximum mental images! Poor, poor Draco.
I, for one, would not be opposed to seeing how this plays out, and how Draco might come to terms- or not- with what he is battling.
Great writing! Love it! Thanks for sharing. :)
7th-Dec-2010 07:46 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :D
6th-Dec-2010 04:36 pm (UTC)
Well done!
7th-Dec-2010 05:04 am (UTC)
Thanks!
6th-Dec-2010 05:12 pm (UTC)
This was so sexy and brilliant.
7th-Dec-2010 04:59 am (UTC)
Thank you so much!
6th-Dec-2010 06:32 pm (UTC)
Lovely fic. Poor Draco.
7th-Dec-2010 04:58 am (UTC)
Thanks!

I've been terribly mean to him lately...
6th-Dec-2010 09:02 pm (UTC)
Oh, honey, this is fantastic! So much intensity in so few words!
7th-Dec-2010 04:58 am (UTC)
:D Thank you! Love the icon!
6th-Dec-2010 09:21 pm (UTC)
Love it! So tender and sweet. I'd love to see a Harry pov of this. ;.;!
7th-Dec-2010 04:59 am (UTC)
Thank you so much :)
7th-Dec-2010 03:54 am (UTC)
Draco came screaming as the blood rushed in his ears; Harry grunted and bit and followed. They lay entwined while Harry softened inside him and mouthed Draco’s shoulder. Draco felt his teeth, felt the warmth rushing under his skin as Harry sucked. There would be love bites on his right shoulder tomorrow.

Draco shut his eyes and hoped it would be enough.


That was hot. I hope Harry is enough for Draco also.
7th-Dec-2010 07:45 am (UTC)
:) Thank you! I'm sure he will be.
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