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Butterfly 
13th-Nov-2008 09:09 am
Converse: black
Title: Butterfly
Word count: ~600
Characters/pairings: Harry/Draco
Summary: PWP. He was a butterfly on a board, pinned by Harry’s eyes, spread by his body.
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Authors Notes: lavillanueva and I were on MSN, and her bf was talking about football and making her crazy. So I distracted her with porn! And am now posting it, because NaBloPoMo is hard. Writing porn straight onto an instant messaging programme is surprisingly satisfying, btw.


Draco turned his face away, pressing it hard against the pillow in an attempt to escape Harry’s intent green gaze. He’d thought it was silly romanticism that made Harry choose this position, that made him want to see Draco’s face. But the moment his determined eyes met Draco’s, the blond felt his defences shatter.

He only just controlled the urge to grab at Harry’s hands – whether for reassurance, or to stop them from sliding warmly down Draco’s naked body, he wasn’t sure. Lubed fingers plunged inside him and Draco twisted on the sheets. Then Harry’s other hand came up, fingers brushing along his jaw, gently pressing his face back round until Draco was forced to meet his eyes.

Harry brushed a hand over the slick head of Draco’s cock, and Draco watched his lips curl. Draco couldn’t stop himself from gasping at the touch. He was a butterfly on a board, pinned by Harry’s eyes, spread by his body. Harry was lying solidly between his legs, and Draco couldn’t have closed them if he’d tried. He swallowed, and tried to relax into Harry’s touch, into the hand running smoothly across his pale chest and playing with tight nipples, into the increasingly forceful fingering.

Harry leant down to kiss him, and Draco gratefully accepted, closing his eyes and kissing back in the safer darkness. Then Harry removed his fingers with a slick sound. Draco opened his eyes in surprise, in time to meet Harry’s and see the pupils blow completely as Harry eased inside.

Draco usually prided himself on being responsive, passionate, anything but passive in bed. Say what you would about patriotism, thinking of England was not going to get him off. But this time... Harry fucked him, good and proper, and Draco felt his Occlumency shields collapsing and his legs spreading further as Harry drove into him, splitting him apart, and still all he could do was lie and shiver and moan and let Harry see him, though that would end in nothing but pain.

Draco screwed his eyes shut and hoped it looked like simple arousal, and let himself feel the thick cock fucking him, the hands holding his hip and his hand, the warmth and the wonder and anything but –

Harry’s cock hit his prostate full on, and Draco’s eyes opened in shocked arousal. He gasped, his body arching, and found himself staring helplessly up into Harry’s eyes.

They were wide, and almost surprised. Draco couldn’t imagine him being surprised by anything that had happened tonight, though. Harry had found him at the bar, whispered against the back of his neck, his warm breath over the fine hairs there making Draco shiver. He’d whispered about how Draco wanted him, that Draco would love to spread his legs and let Harry fuck him however he liked, and Draco hadn’t been able to tell him he was wrong.

But Harry’s eyes were wide, and his mouth was slack. His big hand was rising from where it had clenched on Draco’s hip and held him still. It brushed Draco’s cheek, and he leant into the touch with a low, whining sound. “Beautiful.”

Draco’s heart almost stopped, and he knew Harry could see his shock. Then it was pounding again, fluttering like a butterfly in a cage. Harry grinned a little, teeth flashing in the dim light, and rolled his hips. It sent Draco yowling and effectively distracted him for a moment. Then Harry leant down, until his lips were brushing Draco’s ear. “I said – you’re beautiful.”

The words were ringing in Draco’s ears when he came.


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Comments 
13th-Nov-2008 10:01 am (UTC)
D: I CAN'T DECIDE IF I LIKE IT OR NOT.

I mean, I DO like it, it's sexy and the language is beautiful.
BUTBUT. D: It's like, ANGST. BUT SORTA NOT. BUT IT'S NOT FLUFFY EITHER. *is in despair*

But I do like it. x)
22nd-Nov-2008 07:37 pm (UTC)
LOL. You're cute when you're confused. Thanks for the comment, and lavillanueva says it's 'reluctant fluff'.
13th-Nov-2008 11:10 am (UTC)
*Cough*
*Has an orgasm*
*Cough, splutter*

Okay, so that was hot. I is liking the eye-fuck, and HARRY! So...yummy, I wouldn't mind a slice of him...*wiggly eyebrows*

This however, is NOT D/C! Damn you, I'm still waiting, woman!

Bravo on posting something though, when you coming back home? We could meet and you could gimme the good stuff in person :P

Still on for the 6th?

She who most certainly did not have an orgasm,
Honest.
Lilith
x
26th-Nov-2008 02:26 am (UTC)
YOU'LL GET YOUR DAMN D/C, WOMAN.

Love ya. *grins* Also, glad you liked the eye-fuck, and I entirely believe you about not having an orgasm. Really.
13th-Nov-2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
OH God! That was so hot and beautiful! Oh gosh! I absolutely loved it!!!
22nd-Nov-2008 07:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm sorry I took so long to reply to your comment.
13th-Nov-2008 03:44 pm (UTC)
Mmm. I like how it was both angsty and sweet. And damn hot, too!
26th-Nov-2008 02:21 am (UTC)
Thank you! It went all sweet without me expecting it, but I liked the fluff in the end. :)
13th-Nov-2008 04:38 pm (UTC)
Oh that was hot and very sweet. ♥
22nd-Nov-2008 07:40 pm (UTC)
Awww, thanks! I love it when I get little hearts. Sorry it's taken me so long to reply to comments!
13th-Nov-2008 07:19 pm (UTC)
LOL! IMing porn to friends FTW!
This was incredibly hot and yet had all that emotional vulnerability too - wonderful!
22nd-Nov-2008 07:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you! The emotional vulnerability sort of appeared when I was writing, so I'm glad you think it worked!

And yeah, IM pr0n FTW!

Edited at 2008-11-22 07:42 pm (UTC)
14th-Nov-2008 12:58 am (UTC)
I loved this. This part?

all he could do was lie and shiver and moan and let Harry see him, though that would end in nothing but pain.

Gold. Letting Harry see him. God.

Anna
21st-Jan-2009 11:05 pm (UTC)
I have no idea why I didn't reply to this comment before, but thank you for it! :D Especially since the bit that hit you hard became, basically, the whole point of this little ficlet.
14th-Nov-2008 02:15 am (UTC)
Oh, my. *is breathless*
26th-Nov-2008 02:22 am (UTC)
:D You've left me breathless so often, I'm glad I could return the favour!

Sorry it's taken me so long to reply to your comment, sweets.
14th-Nov-2008 04:18 am (UTC)
Wow. Thank you for that most tantalizing read!
26th-Nov-2008 02:23 am (UTC)
Heh. Thank you for that most lovely comment! The icon is awesome.
14th-Nov-2008 04:33 am (UTC)
I really enjoyed this!
26th-Nov-2008 02:23 am (UTC)
Thank you, that's great to hear! Sorry it's taking me so long to reply to comments.
14th-Nov-2008 04:51 am (UTC)
The whole thing, it's beautiful. I love it.
22nd-Nov-2008 07:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Sorry it took so long for me to reply to your comment.
14th-Nov-2008 04:59 am (UTC)
Wow! IM porn ... and it was fabulous. I love Harry's determination, and the shattering of Draco's defences. Brilliant!
26th-Nov-2008 02:20 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but the comment did make me very happy. :)
14th-Nov-2008 05:50 am (UTC)
Wow! Sooo want more! Wanna know what happens after.
22nd-Nov-2008 07:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you! And what happens after is nice things. I promise. :)
14th-Nov-2008 07:41 am (UTC)
Dear lord, I love you... How do you write such beautiful smut?? Gah... I really need to start going on MSN...
22nd-Nov-2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
Awww! Thank you, Kuri! Sorry I took so long to respond.

And yes, I'll write you MSN!porn should you need it, too.
15th-Nov-2008 05:00 am (UTC)
Very very nice. I love the mood and Harry telling Draco that he knew Draco wanted Harry to fuck him and Draco not being able to deny it. And I particularly liked the analogy of Draco felt like he was being pinned like a butterfly in a box by Harry's gaze - and then Harry's surprise at how beautiful he finds Draco. Very nice :)
26th-Nov-2008 02:28 am (UTC)
So the message I'm getting is you thought it was nice? :D

Thanks so much for the comment! I love when people get the random literary moments in my smut. Also, when they like the things I liked best.

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to comments! I fail at LJ just now.
15th-Nov-2008 08:36 pm (UTC)
So sensual. Amazing. Just, wow. I adore it. It is so slow, intense, unresistable.
26th-Nov-2008 02:19 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I absolutely love that description; it's exactly how Draco experienced this, for me.
6th-Dec-2008 12:42 am (UTC)
Wow.
I was a having a bad day.
I now feel loads better.
Thanks. :)
9th-Jan-2009 03:31 pm (UTC)
Awww, yay! One of my favourite comments ever, hands down. I'm so glad it made you feel better! :D

Oh, and sorry I took so long to reply - I've been having massive internet issues.
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