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Fool 
1st-Apr-2009 09:34 am
Converse: black
Title: Fool
Word count: 300
Characters/pairings: Harry/Draco
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: This is the latest installment in the Smitten series and was written for hd100’s current prompt, weasel.


When Draco woke, he was alone in Harry’s bed. It was cold: Harry must have thrown the duvet back when he got up. Draco squashed the ridiculous side of himself that would have hoped to be tucked back in, and sat up. He slid out of bed – after a quick peek through the four-poster’s curtains to check the dormitory was empty – and got into yesterday’s robes. He wanted to find Harry, then a shower.

His mouth quirked at the thought. Maybe he could have them both together.

He went downstairs, and found Harry and the Weasel in the common room.

~*~

“Harry,” he said, smiling. He went over, and leant in to kiss Harry – not only because the Weasel’s reaction would be funny. Harry pulled back sharply, and Draco frowned.

“Morning, Malfoy.” Harry’s voice was blank. Draco felt a shock go through him: where was the tenderness he’d got used to so fast? “You can see yourself out, right?”

Draco blinked at him. “What?”

“You heard me. Come on, Malfoy, we’ve fucked. Time to get your loose arse out of here.”

Draco couldn’t move. He felt cold, sick; divorced from his body, that had been so pleasured a few hours before.

~*~

Harry looked irritated now. “Go on, out! I’ve had you, which is pretty satisfying. Being the first one to fuck your haughty self’ll be a nice memory for Potions lessons.” He leered, and Draco flinched. He wished he hadn’t; he couldn’t bear the mocking grin spreading over Harry’s face. “Cheers, really. Here’s a tip, though – you might want to get some practice in. The event itself was kind of a disappointment. There’s only so much of you lying around and gasping like a beached fish a guy wants, you know?”

Draco fled, heartsick. What a stupid, smitten fool he’d been.


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Comments 
1st-Apr-2009 09:42 am (UTC)
Harry needs a slap.

Thats all I can say here, Im actually very angry by him.

Which means, well done! You wrote the scene so well and I felt for Draco, I really did. I kind of wanted to stand in front of him and protect him from Harry's abuse.

Seriously enjoyed this!
14th-May-2009 06:22 pm (UTC)
Yay! I love proper emotional reactions, this was a lovely comment! :D And don't worry, it was an April Fools! So all is okay. The real update is about to go up.

PS: sorry for comment replying fail.
1st-Apr-2009 01:24 pm (UTC)
WTF?! Why's Harry being such an ass?! Poor Draco =(
14th-May-2009 06:19 pm (UTC)
APRIL FOOL!

(Also, wow I fail at replying to comments.)

Icon win, but don't worry, no need to smack down on Harry. I'm just about to post the real update, in which Harry will not be a bastard at all.
1st-Apr-2009 07:36 pm (UTC)
It isn't really happening, is it? It's just a bad dream. Right? If not - I'm so going to make Harry regret the way he treated poor Draco. *is murderous*
14th-May-2009 06:19 pm (UTC)
It's not really happening! Just an April Fool joke. Don't murder Harry, in the real update (which I'm just about to post) he isn't an unutterable bastard.
2nd-Apr-2009 06:28 am (UTC)
D: HEYHEY. *POKES YOU* IN THE REPLY FROM LAST INSTALLMENT YOU SAID ONLY GOOD THINGS WILL COME OUT OF THIS!

THIS IS NOT A GOOD THING. >| CLEARLY. *SHAKES FIST*
12th-Apr-2009 01:35 pm (UTC)
LOL. Bad me...

April Fools!

I am a very naughty lokifan, but I'll post the real installment tonight (I'm just about to go out).

And you never gave me a prompt for your birthday fic! Can I have one, or should I just write something unbearably cute?
12th-Apr-2009 06:12 pm (UTC)
XD Oh good. Haha. I have a habit of not noticing dates. :D

Alright~ :D Hope you enjoyed your daily activities. XD

:0 URM. Jae filled my Beaubaxtons!Draco wish, so I am going to ask you for...Angel/Spike. With lots of sugar on top. :3 Or lots of shagging.
2nd-Apr-2009 04:48 pm (UTC)
...April Fools? D:
14th-May-2009 06:21 pm (UTC)
Yes! Good for you, you're one of the only ones who realised. The real update's about to go up.
6th-Apr-2009 10:33 pm (UTC)


* Apr. 1st, 2009 at 9:34 AM



Date posted. Tell me it's a joke. Please. You promised *good things*. GOOD THINGS, ya hear?
Goodness, m'dear. Harry's an arsehole.
14th-May-2009 06:20 pm (UTC)
LOL. You actually got it! It was an April Fools, and I'm posting the real update now, in which Harry is much less of an arsehole.

How are you?
14th-May-2009 02:52 pm (UTC)
Oh poor Draco. Will we get to see an update soon where all will be explained?
14th-May-2009 06:20 pm (UTC)
Posting it now! Thanks for reminding me to make it all better.*hugs*
3rd-Jun-2009 04:43 pm (UTC)
TEH ANGST, HOW I LOVE THEE! Although, I have to admit, some of Harry's comments were insanely below the belt. *shakes fist*
3rd-Jun-2009 06:38 pm (UTC)
LOL. It's not real! I promise!

Heh, poor angst-lover. There is very little angst to be had here.
3rd-Jun-2009 06:39 pm (UTC)
I'm an angst WHORE. I can't help it, I'm hardwired that way. Although, fluff is good in small doses, like this series. :D
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