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Weasel King 
13th-May-2009 03:00 pm
Converse: black
Title: Weasel King
Word count: 200
Characters/pairings: Ron/Draco
Rating R
Challenge: tribute
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: This was written for rondracodrabble’s current prompt, tribute.


“You lost.” Ron’s triumphant voice sounded as if he were about to break into laughter.

Heat rose in Draco’s cheeks. He slammed his locker open unnecessarily hard and glared in at his towel and French shampoo.

“The Cannons, the ‘joke of the league’ I think you said, beat your team.”

Draco gritted his teeth. Bloody Weasley. When he was feeling confident, he flew like the wind was his to command.

“It was a fluke.”

“Maybe...” Ron said, the grin evident in his voice. “Or maybe it was because you were too busy staring at me to look for the Snitch.”

~*~

Draco whipped round from his locker to face Ron, and he felt his mouth go dry. Ron was sweaty and smiling and so vital that Draco felt overwhelmed.

Still: Draco could always rely on his sneer.

“Been delusional long?”

Ron stalked towards him: that usually-hidden hint of command was suddenly stark. “Quiet, Malfoy.” He put one large hand on the wall by Draco’s head; Draco was surrounded by him. Draco stared up into his blue eyes, breathless. “And if you must insult me... I like the old insults better.”

Draco dropped to his knees, and paid proper tribute to the king.


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Comments 
13th-May-2009 02:39 pm (UTC)
:FLAILS WILDLY:

Oh BB, this is so, so good.

Draco was surrounded by him.

That line makes me warm all over. It's so literal and figurative all at once; I love it.
14th-May-2009 12:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I think I'll be even more flattered by this later, because I do read Ron/Draco (even though I'm generally a Harry/Draco girl) and I definitely recognise your name. *wanders to your LJ to work out why*

*grins* Also, you like my favourite line! Props to you!
19th-May-2009 01:06 pm (UTC)
Also, you like my favourite line!

How could one *not* like that line? Volumes are spoken in five simple words.

I definitely recognise your name.

Yeah, I'm a cheering section to Ron/Draco all by myself, I think. I've written a few smutly things and laboured over some fanmixes, but that's all. :)

13th-May-2009 07:25 pm (UTC)
This is AWESOME. Even if my OTP will (probably) always be Harry/Draco, it's nice to read something different every once in a while. And even though Ron is my favorite character in the series, I don't actually read that much pr0n of him. I just love how domineering Ron is in this.
14th-May-2009 12:18 pm (UTC)
Yay! I'm so pleased you read my Ron/Draco! *hugs*

I don't know how I feel about Ron, often. He sometimes seems more flawed to me than Harry is, but actually Harry's flaws are the kind that always piss me off - arrogance, being self-centred, a propensity for control - Ron's, not so much.

Plus, I read this scarily plausible fic in the World Cup that was just exactly what I worry about: Draco was changing so much to be exactly what Harry wanted and Harry didn't notice. (It was also a poke at certain fics: Draco's an Auror and only hangs out with Harry's friends!) So I'm kind of in the mood to give Draco Ron instead!

THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE DOM!RON SMUT.
14th-May-2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
"THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE DOM!RON SMUT."

No, there just needs to be more Sub!Draco smut. =D
14th-May-2009 08:54 pm (UTC)
*grins* Shall we meet in the middle? Dom!Ron fucking sub!Draco. :D
14th-May-2009 01:42 am (UTC)
mmmm!!!! This is just pure YUMMMM!!!! I've somehow developed a fondness for Ron/Draco... and this is just HOT!!! Seems like Draco isn't objecting so much to paying a little 'homage'! haha

Thanks for sharing! *hugs*
14th-May-2009 11:58 am (UTC)
Why thank you! *grins* I have a definite fondness for Ron/Draco myself. (Why do I have no R/D icons? Why?!) And nope, I don't think Draco is objecting at all.

Thanks for commenting! *hugs back*
14th-May-2009 10:40 pm (UTC)
This is exactly why Ron/Draco is my OTP. You describe all the love/hate, growly manliness of them together. Yum!
18th-May-2009 02:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D Love/hate is my OTP!
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