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Scent Memory 
26th-Jun-2011 12:00 pm
Title: Scent Memory
Word count: 100
Characters/pairings: Ron/Draco
Rating: R
Summary: What is it about leather that just says 'I OWN your ass'? – Desperate Housewives
Warnings: blindfolding, implied flogging and D/s
Disclaimer: The boys and girls belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: This was written for the current prompt at rondracodrabble, leather.

Scent is the most evocative sense.

Draco's blindfolded, but he recognises the smell as Ron runs the flogger under his nose, for all that his breathing's shallow: leather and suede. It's only air that's kissing his naked skin, for now: he hangs suspended, waiting. But the smell of the leather in Ron's hand makes Draco's whole body shudder pleasurably with the memories. Ron's deep chuckle follows the movement.

“There you go. Now, kiss it.”

Draco does so, letting his tongue flick against the thin straps. He hears Ron's footsteps as the other man circles behind him.

“Now count.”

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26th-Jun-2011 11:05 am (UTC)
FFFFFFF...so much heat packed into so few words! I'm deeply impressed by the story you've told here, and how well you've illustrated their dynamic. Gorgeous!
26th-Jun-2011 02:09 pm (UTC)
*beams* Wow, thank you so much!
26th-Jun-2011 02:48 pm (UTC)
Oh, GUH. So, so, so hot. You paint an excellent image in just a few words.
27th-Jun-2011 12:20 am (UTC)
Thank you so much :D The image was really clear in my mind, and I'm really pleased that came across.
26th-Jun-2011 03:48 pm (UTC)
UNF. One of the hottest drabbles I've ever read.
27th-Jun-2011 12:20 am (UTC)
Dance of Writerly Validation time!
26th-Jun-2011 04:09 pm (UTC)
OH wow....I need to go find a cold shower now :)
27th-Jun-2011 12:21 am (UTC)
Or a warm one with a vibrating showerhead ;)
27th-Jun-2011 01:58 am (UTC)
There is that as well :)
26th-Jun-2011 08:03 pm (UTC)
Oh wow this is so very yummy!
27th-Jun-2011 12:20 am (UTC)
Thank you so much :)
26th-Jun-2011 11:05 pm (UTC)
Well, I'm moist.
27th-Jun-2011 12:21 am (UTC)
*bursts out laughing* Comment win!
27th-Jun-2011 01:28 am (UTC)
Squeeee!!!! I'm going to hide in the closet and count too.
18th-Dec-2011 01:17 pm (UTC)
Okay so I have no idea how I missed this comment, but since I found it again... thanks very much!
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